Oh I missed you Shrike..
Oh I missed you Shrike..
So slick.
Props for Oreskaband
Yeap.
Yes.
perfection?
yes
It was okay..
I really wish this was a bit longer and had a little more effort put into it.
throw a penny into the fountain, close your eyes, cross your fingers and think of the north star. who knows, maybe your wish may come true
THANK YOU
So first off, I gotta say that this was an amazing revamp. Your style worked very well for all of the characters and the originality of it all was refreshing. I can tell that you have the potential to really utilize flash to its fullest, knowing this I'd like to give you some critiques on this as to aid your success in doing so. Refining the flow of movement of the scenes and characters would help dramatically in the look of your flashes. Maybe connecting scenes a little more together and angling them correctly would help. Overall improvement on and more time consuming character animation would also help the flow immensely. Lastly I'd really like to see you use some sound effects in your flashes, maybe even voices, I believe this could make your flashes even more enjoyable.
Sorry I wrote like, a paragraph and a half on useless crap, I just had to get this out there. I can't wait to see more of your stuff man.
Really well done...
But you have some very obvious influences... Mainly being Cowboy Bebop and FLCL...
Thank you..
I love you. *sniffle*
so much.
Balls
Age 32, n
Illustrator
Joined on 6/28/06